Finished Chapter 36 last night. I'm very happy with the results. It sets up the final battle nicely with the characters literally looking down an abyss. I also hinted at some back story between R'wick and his favorite cousin.
Next chapter: I need to bring Nalthia, critlings, R'wick together with Kat, Cela, Kinjara and the Mistresses as they fight over Tristien's mind and will. The last draft's battle was truly wimpy. That's cause I spent so much time over the rest of the story, I hardly gave the final battle any thought and I just wanted to end the draft.
This time though, I've been watching a lot of action movies, and letting images roam around in my head. I've tied in the final battle more with concept of Material and Immaterial realms.
Now, I need to see the final battle.
Next chapter: I need to bring Nalthia, critlings, R'wick together with Kat, Cela, Kinjara and the Mistresses as they fight over Tristien's mind and will. The last draft's battle was truly wimpy. That's cause I spent so much time over the rest of the story, I hardly gave the final battle any thought and I just wanted to end the draft.
This time though, I've been watching a lot of action movies, and letting images roam around in my head. I've tied in the final battle more with concept of Material and Immaterial realms.
Now, I need to see the final battle.